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So here we are. It took a while because I needed to redraft a few things, rewrite a little discussion and make Saur quite the formidable character. He's a right bastard...
Anyway, so this chapter really steals the plot away from where you might expect. I might have to come back, add a bit in between about the journey there, but it's fine for now.
Failure...
They never reached their destination? Spanners turns out to be a coward? They're kind of failures. Saur never catches Spanners, so he fails. I guess it was a really lousy attempt at it, but the next one is worse. Much worse.
I made need to wrap the idea I have around the idea from the chapter name, like I did with Rivalry. That one turned out okay.
Anyway, hope you enjoy this chapter.
Anyway, so this chapter really steals the plot away from where you might expect. I might have to come back, add a bit in between about the journey there, but it's fine for now.
Failure...
They never reached their destination? Spanners turns out to be a coward? They're kind of failures. Saur never catches Spanners, so he fails. I guess it was a really lousy attempt at it, but the next one is worse. Much worse.
I made need to wrap the idea I have around the idea from the chapter name, like I did with Rivalry. That one turned out okay.
Anyway, hope you enjoy this chapter.
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I don't like Mr. Spanners any more.